Comments for Room 18's Sharing Space http://room18space.edublogs.org A Balmoral School Learning Adventure. Fri, 04 Jul 2008 15:02:22 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on Shakespear Camp 2008 by Dylan http://room18space.edublogs.org/2008/04/13/shakespear-camp-2008/#comment-368 Dylan Thu, 26 Jun 2008 10:39:11 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/2008/04/13/shakespear-camp-2008/#comment-368 Wow a shakespeare camp that sound`s amazing. Wow a shakespeare camp that sound`s amazing.

]]> Comment on Writing by Amelia http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-367 Amelia Wed, 25 Jun 2008 07:01:29 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-367 Its Amelia Camille:I really liked how you described Bluebell and you hooked me in.:) Hannah:I like the story you did and you used some descriptive language.:) Isabella:you hooked me in and described your character well :) Its Amelia
Camille:I really liked how you described Bluebell and you hooked me in.:)
Hannah:I like the story you did and you used some descriptive language.:)
Isabella:you hooked me in and described your character well :)

]]> Comment on Writing by ahmed http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-366 ahmed Tue, 24 Jun 2008 09:31:33 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-366 Here is a <a href="http://www.toondoo.com/View.toon?param=295207" rel="nofollow">link to </a>my awesome toon doo. Here is a link to my awesome toon doo.

]]> Comment on Writing by Isabella http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-365 Isabella Tue, 24 Jun 2008 05:00:26 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-365 Isabella here, Camille- I like how Camille described Bluebell the rabbits fur and how it was soft, silky and fragile. Hugo- it hooked me in how in the start of his character description; Hugo explained what the autumn morning was like and how the leaves lay there on the ground. I also saw that he used a bit of onomatopoeia in it. (OOPS! And BANG!) Anna- Can I have a guess who you were writing about in your 1st character description? Is it ‘Mr. Jones?’ Isabella here,

Camille- I like how Camille described Bluebell the rabbits fur and how it was soft, silky and fragile.
Hugo- it hooked me in how in the start of his character description; Hugo explained what the autumn morning was like and how the leaves lay there on the ground. I also saw that he used a bit of onomatopoeia in it. (OOPS! And BANG!)
Anna- Can I have a guess who you were writing about in your 1st character description? Is it ‘Mr. Jones?’

]]> Comment on Beautiful? Dove Evolution Response by Trish http://room18space.edublogs.org/2008/05/13/beautiful-dove-evolution-response/#comment-364 Trish Mon, 23 Jun 2008 08:10:54 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/2008/05/13/beautiful-dove-evolution-response/#comment-364 The beauty industry is a very interesting industry. It relies so heavily on advertising, but if this footage is anything to go by, one could assume that a lot of the advertising is false. Isn't false advertising illegal?? Also isn't it a pity that we look at advertising to tell us what is beautiful, rather than what we find beautiful. I wonder how she felt after having her physical features altered so much? Good? Bad? Indifferent? How do you think you would feel? The beauty industry is a very interesting industry. It relies so heavily on advertising, but if this footage is anything to go by, one could assume that a lot of the advertising is false.

Isn’t false advertising illegal??

Also isn’t it a pity that we look at advertising to tell us what is beautiful, rather than what we find beautiful.

I wonder how she felt after having her physical features altered so much? Good? Bad? Indifferent? How do you think you would feel?

]]> Comment on Writing by kate http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-363 kate Sat, 21 Jun 2008 21:48:14 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-363 hi andrew this is the adress for my blog http://katessharingspace.blogspot.com/ hope you like it from kate hi andrew
this is the adress for my blog
http://katessharingspace.blogspot.com/
hope you like it
from kate

]]> Comment on Beautiful? Dove Evolution Response by normastar http://room18space.edublogs.org/2008/05/13/beautiful-dove-evolution-response/#comment-362 normastar Sat, 14 Jun 2008 05:26:55 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/2008/05/13/beautiful-dove-evolution-response/#comment-362 Hello Room 18! I think that is so cool! That makes a cool difference to your face. But you are who you are don't make yourself younger just like Ahmed said!! Good point! Hello Room 18!
I think that is so cool! That makes a cool difference to your face.

But you are who you are don’t make yourself younger just like Ahmed said!!

Good point!

]]> Comment on Writing by Anna http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-361 Anna Thu, 12 Jun 2008 18:38:54 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-361 HI Again This isn't a charter description, I like Felix's peace of writing because of his chose of words. I also like Isabella's setting and how she described The charter. Camille's one was cool because she used a beginning that hooked well me into the story. Bye Anna HI Again
This isn’t a charter description,
I like Felix’s peace of writing because of his chose of words.
I also like Isabella’s setting and how she described The charter.
Camille’s one was cool because she used a beginning that hooked well me into the story.

Bye Anna

]]> Comment on Writing by camille hay http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-360 camille hay Thu, 12 Jun 2008 08:26:08 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-360 Character Description: About a rabbit called Bluebell Bluebell's soft, silky, fragile fur glistened in the morning dew as she hunted around poking her nose in every crack. She swiftly drew out some wet paper from under her pink, chewed water bowl reading it carefully her eyes dodging around every word looking for an answer. Her dainty, pink nose reached out again to the water bowl this time for a pen. Character Description: About a rabbit called Bluebell

Bluebell’s soft, silky, fragile fur glistened in the morning dew as she hunted around poking her nose in every crack. She swiftly drew out some wet paper from under her pink, chewed water bowl reading it carefully her eyes dodging around every word looking for an answer. Her dainty, pink nose reached out again to the water bowl this time for a pen.

]]> Comment on Writing by Isabella http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-359 Isabella Thu, 12 Jun 2008 08:09:26 +0000 http://room18space.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-359 Hi Everyone, Here is my character description: His fair hair blew in the wind, trying to get across the sand dunes. His beady blue eyes closing in the sandy air. Struggling to get to shelter, he stumbled over his pale shoelaces. He lay there; lifeless and no one in sight for miles. But if you looked closely, deep down inside, you would be able to see the faintest glimmer of life in him. His elf like ears twitched when he heard the soft crunch of the waves shattering. And his life was gone. Hi Everyone,
Here is my character description:

His fair hair blew in the wind, trying to get across the sand dunes. His beady blue eyes closing in the sandy air. Struggling to get to shelter, he stumbled over his pale shoelaces. He lay there; lifeless and no one in sight for miles. But if you looked closely, deep down inside, you would be able to see the faintest glimmer of life in him. His elf like ears twitched when he heard the soft crunch of the waves shattering. And his life was gone.

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